Depressed poem

[KamiKaZe]

I wrote this when I was going through a rather rough spot in my life. A friend of mine really liked it, so I guess you guys can give your opinions.

The air is getting thin
My walls are caving in
I put my feet on the floor
But they don't wanna walk no more
The air it suffocates
All I feel is hate
I try to let out a scream
But nothing can wake me from this dream
This nightmare
It's not fair
Why can't I die?
My life is just a lie
I wish I had the strength
To cut my life's length
I have no reason to live
Have nothing left to give
Why can't they go away?
The people...Why do they stay?
The demons...they're in my head
Making me say things not meant to be said
The hate..I can't get it out
Making me scream..making me shout
I feel my head's gonna explode
Gonna cave in..maybe implode
I just wish people would see..
See the real person, deep inside me
The pain is just too much to bear
Nobody even seems to care
They walk on by without even caring
While my insides keep tearing and tearing
I'm breaking down now..I'm crying
I'm trying to stop..I'M TRYING!!
The pain is too deep
All I can do is weep
I wanna hit the floor
Dont breathe no more
My heart..it aches
My hands..they shake
The pain is sinking in
Oh here come the feelings again
The tears run me dry
Til i can no longer cry
Why can't i die?
Why?


I fall down to my knees
God, I'm begging you please
Just end my misery
End the life in me

[Michael]

That was depressing...I liked it.

[alpha]

w00t! I didn't read it all but the parts I did read were awesome possum!

http://cosplayff.free.fr/i_will.mid - probably liked it more since i'm reading it to the beat of this lol.