Poem Help

[dncardman]

Hey if some peoples could write a few poems for me I will give them endless amounts of praise and all of my credits. They can pretty much be about whatever, just make sure you use different kinds like haiku and stuff, try using like a methaphor or paradox and stuff like that in some. If anyody can even do a couple your time will be GREATLY appreciated. Thanks Much.

[peasantlover]

Trying to impress a girl, or cheat on your homework assignment?
Here's one

Roses are Red
Violets are blue
When it comes to writing poetry
You havent a clue.


Thank you, thank you very much. Feel free to use it DNcardman.

[dncardman]

In all seriousness now, I'm just not very good at it and I need it for a homework assignment. Now any help would be appreciated.

[Identity Crisis]

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[peasantlover]

Prolly not a good idea to use a poem that is on a poetry website..

[MagicJuggler]

Is this for homework?
Do you want me to help you?
I work for a fee.

Contrary to myth.
This rolling stone gathers moss.
It is forgotten.

I just want to say.
You are a real big fat-ass.
This is really true.

Want to do simile? Use John Lennon.
"Well we all shine on! Like the moon, and the sun, and the stars! Well we all shine on! Shining, shining, shining, shining."

[dncardman]

THanks IC, to the rest of you...screw off, I did alot of my own and they were quite good.

[peasantlover]

hahaha.. nice, magic jugglar, nice.

[Jon]

Dude, both times I read MagicJuggler's post I got a strong urge to listen to the beatles.... and I did. Each time.

[Dorbin]

It's a poem, Dncardman. Just write the damn thing(s) and get it over with. ;)

[Bloodman]

And as i came to be
i opened my eyes
only to see
there was nothing for me
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I flew through the sky
and did so in my mind
and then i fell to cry
for the peace that was with me then
has flown away
just like me in my dream
_______________________________

Happyness is great
or so they say
But to me it's really nothing
It's nothing, day by day
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To live or to die
To lie or to truth
To lust or to dream
To give up all hope
Or to leave them all
and leave like i never lived