Suicide poem

[csninja]

Title: Memories

If theres no point to living then don't waste your time.
Just pull the trigger, it's gonna be fine.

You cant forget your memories, they still haunt you.
Run all you want, theres nothing you can do.

For screaming and shouting just brings back the pain.
So go line up in death's painful lane.

Stop wishing and hoping, it wont come true.
Your lifes a piece of shit in all that you do.

Now this is goodbye, I'm sorry my friend.
For this is where you're life shall end.
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Wadya guys think? :wave: :twitch:

[Spatula]

Rapist.

[plebben]

good rhyming but since death is horrible an suicide even worse...
... I just dont hope you have those thoughts.

[csninja]

lmao. i dont. i was just bored.

[Travis]

You're 13 years old. Go play basketball or something, or talk about cooties with your school buddies.

[TyBO]

Well... it's to the point.

I really can't say anything positive about it though. Your poem encourages suicide... do you enjoy seeing other people die? Are you planning a genicide? Do we have the next Hitler amongst us?

Don't write a suicide poem because you think it's cool.

[xjermariox]

how sad.. *sniff*...nah but i thought it was good even if i was about suicide or death. Doesnt really matter what its about. Its the way the words are put together to make it flow like it did. GJ C.

[C~MONEY]

THis was to the point man NICE

[franco]

nice dawg

[Tael]

What's the point in writing a suicide poem if you're not suicidal?

[Flaccid Acid]

What's the point in writing a suicide poem if you're not suicidal?

To be a cool poser gothic teenager? That would be my guess.


I dunno, gothic suicidal people are always too... depressed. Have some joy in life people.

[OutlawAdidas]

don't become stereotypical and go after the gothics. You don't have to be gothic to be suicidal.

[Perfect Agent]

CSperm is so emo.

[Travis]

I wrote a poem about suicide too:

Your lifes a piece of shit
you hate it
you want to die
so you pretend like you got hit
in the face
and then you fall down the stairs
into the eternal hellfire
praise the life of satan
for he is your saviour in all the pain
you like to eat doughnuts so the kids called you fat
and you wore a little red hat
you fucking know your life is a piece of shit
so you die
die
kill yourself
motherfucker


I hope you guys like it, it's a reflection of my inner turmoil. I spent a whole lot of time (15 seconds) on this poem.

[Perfect Agent]

You should go see a psychiatrist or something man, you sound fucked up.

[Harmony]

I think you should just stay anyway from anything sharp or that could cause harm to you...

Just stay away from everything actually!

[Jon]

People that actualy do commit suicide don't go writing poems about it and showing everybody. People that commit suicide keep everything to themselves and one day kill themselves. But still, find a different hobby CSpawn. Writing about suicide could get you into some unwanted trouble and scare the people you love.

[Glenn2K4]

i like Suzuki's poem :)

[meowmix]

emo

[Tael]

What's emo?