Black Heart Sonnet

[OutlawAdidas]

Done in iambic pentameter. A shakespearen sonnet. 10 syllables.


Black Heart

I look upon your face with so much hate
Such as an insect frowns the winters taint
And follows an inevitable fate.
A heart so strong, yet slowly becomes faint.
Wish upon stars, and dream the dream of death
For black be so grim, and souls are to reap
Torment and chastise, stolen your last breath
An abyss becomes your eternal sleep.
Thy suicide brings nothing without sin
Quell the fire that burns inside your black heart
Morals have abandoned ours needs within
Mind and body shattered and blown apart.
Suffer in agony, crucify your pain
Heaven is here, yet theres nothing to gain.

[dncardman]

Damn man you got some real talent there, that's seriously a great poem.

[OutlawAdidas]

its a sonnet

[Dorbin]

Dark, disturbing...me likie!

Good job with the sonnet, OA. Never wrote one myself.

[OutlawAdidas]

thanks dorbin.

[Bryan]

Nice job. I was never good at these, so I'm impressed when I see someone who is.

[koten]

dark and twisted Outlaw.

Very nice.

[OutlawAdidas]

twisted and dark, thanks you guys

[Sendok]

nice job man, you should write a book.

[Bryan]

Yeah, "OutlawAdidas Does the Sonnet"

[OutlawAdidas]

a book of Dark Sonnets teehee